My application essay for grad school was a nerve-wracking experience. Writing usually comes pretty easy for me, but I haven't done any serious writing for a long time and I was kind of afraid that all of my skills had deserted me. So, I agonized over it and for the first time in my life I wrote a rough draft. And I kept editing it until it didn't make me cringe... it must have been OK in the end, right? :)
Anyways, my opening (and favorite) paragraphs ended up on the cutting room floor, so to speak. When I decided to rework the essay I was actually a little nervous about taking it out because I liked it so much, but when you only have 750 words... grrr.
And since I won't ever share the finished product that did, in fact, get me into grad school, here's an excerpt from the one that didn't (or couldn't? since I didn't give it a chance? Oh, whatever...):
A
bright yellow Perma-Bound Baby-Sitters’
Club serial. The beginning of a love affair with the library and all things
information started with a trip to the school library and grew from there. From
there an insatiable curiosity was born. I became the frequent subject of
lighthearted teasing because of all the books I consumed and how quickly. My
mother referred to it as a failure to grow out of the “why?” stage so common in
little children.
My
senior year of high school reflected the growth of my curiosity. I took several
history courses as “electives” – courses I didn’t need – just because the
content interested me. My success in those courses made the choice of an
undergraduate major easy. History fit my “why?” personality perfectly. Perhaps
a little foolishly I didn’t enter college with a clear career path in mind. I
wanted to learn. I knew what I wanted to learn and that’s what I set out
towards. What I intended to do with what I would learn had yet to be
determined.
There you have it. A little rough and ultimately unfinished.
lex i love this. you are an incredible writer! and congrats a million times for getting in!! so exciting. missing you and loving you!
ReplyDeleteThanks Ali bug! Nothing exciting can happen 'til I get there, k? :)
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